"Notice the Blood"

David Hunter Sutherland
Fishkill, NY
USA
3468441@mcimail.com

Deep South v.1 n.3 (Spring, 1995)


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Notice the Blood

Before the explosion,
blesses our charred souls, 
and its ashes Good Friday you
with kisses,

We will make love,
lips narrowed to a chitinous smile,
bodies pulsing to the flash-fire phantoms of
pearly lights, phosphers and lavas caressed about
skin imitating breast.
Our blackbody wafed upon a kites' smooth glide and
twirling madly as the Autumn leaf 
falls . . .

A moment before impact,
the class bell rings,
the parlor shop closes,
the lady with the nails tightens her skirt a notch,
and our Gods chant an "Auld Lang Syne" too banners forgotten . . .

But,
before the explosion rattles
this mortal chain of
spillovers, contersunks, drains and vague prepositions . . .

We will make love,
lucid in the throes of a nuclear orgasm,
blind as the hot ash of nuptials bake our senses 
into the melting asphalt, and
naked . . . as if,
one can almost peel back the numbness of
layered muscle and hardened capillaries.
Our passion now river-filled over 
as the rivulets of lines and cracks
notice the blood.


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